A good one, right off the docks. You have a natural feel for Haiku. One of my favorite styles for writing poetry. What you want to write, condensed into perfectly chosen words. Not so easy tuning them up but satisfying. jk
I really felt the feelings and imagery you created showed you have the sensitivity in you for writing Haiku.
Writing Haiku is something I have been writing for enough years to recognize the talent. It is a honing down of meaning. It is at time a feeling of touching something mystical. I hope you keep writing Haiku. You will continue to feel the satisfaction of actually achieving something magical & symbolically mystical. Where do the words comes from once they have arrived on the paper?
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Welcome to the Haikumily. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much Ronovan…looking forward to many more challenges 🙂
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You just made my day. Can’t even express how I am feeling. Thank you so much once again for all your kind words and of course for liking my pic :))).
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A good one, right off the docks. You have a natural feel for Haiku. One of my favorite styles for writing poetry. What you want to write, condensed into perfectly chosen words. Not so easy tuning them up but satisfying. jk
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Thanks a ton for all the nice words. As this is my first haiku so each and every like, comment means a lot.
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I really felt the feelings and imagery you created showed you have the sensitivity in you for writing Haiku.
Writing Haiku is something I have been writing for enough years to recognize the talent. It is a honing down of meaning. It is at time a feeling of touching something mystical. I hope you keep writing Haiku. You will continue to feel the satisfaction of actually achieving something magical & symbolically mystical. Where do the words comes from once they have arrived on the paper?
Look forward to reading more. jk 🙂
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Thanks for such deep analysis and thought…enjoying reading your blog. Keep posting :).
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Thank you. Definitely addicting to posting. Hope to continue for a long time. 🙂
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New life, better life, new hope. Nicely done for your first:)
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Thank you so much. Yes writing Haiku is a new hope to the new world 🙂
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*addicted* Oops!
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Amen!!!
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